THE CHANGES IN A CAR OWNERSHP
BETWEEN 1972 AND 2002.
According to the line graph, England is
the country that uses all mean of transportation. Northerm Ireland is
the country that uses a bit less mean of transportation than the other
countries.
Wales uses a bit more a car or a van than Nothern Ireland, furthermore Scotland uses a car or a van consierably less
than they used to.
In addition all coutries go on foot as a mean of transportation there
for the least way to tavel is the motorcycle or bike, being England the only country that uses this
mean. Inconclusion the country that uses
less mean of tranportation is Nothern
Ireland in fact it has just four mean os transportation
comparing with the other countries, and it is the country that has other way to
travel without taking into account the
ones mention in the chart.
Tr. Angy in your writing task you have written four times the word "mean" in the same paragraph. You'd better change it or delete at least one of these.
ReplyDeleteI tell you because I did the same in mine :P